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Saturday, July 18, 2009

那一天是新学年,也是小玲和小麦升上中学的第一天。她们来自不同的学校,可是那么巧她们读同一班。缘分让她们遇见和认识对方。由于她们刚来到陌生的环境,又没有旧朋友和她们同校,所以她们就在班上坐在一起。她们开始介绍对方,也聊了起来。小玲是个善良和充满创意的女生, 而小麦是个开朗和勤劳的女生。

过了几个月的相处,她们渐渐变成好朋友。由于她们住在附近,她们就一起上学,一起读书,一起玩乐,一起出去。久而久之,她们变成形影不离的好朋友。无论去到哪里,都可以看到她们时常在一起。

好景不常在。就在她们升上中四的那一年,小玲因为误会小麦而远离她。小麦当时很伤心,不明白小玲远离她的原因,也没有问她。也因为这样她们之间的误会越来越深。始终没有人肯踏出一步去了解一切的真相。她们开始很少和对方说话,也没有一起上学。久而久之,她们再也没有和对方说话了。

直到有一天,小麦才发现原来小玲是因为误会她而远离她。正当小麦想要解决她们之间的误会时,已经太迟了。小玲已经把她们的友谊给忘了。友情就像感情一样,一旦问题拖太久,就会变淡了。无论再怎么努力去挽回,也已经无可补救了。

就因为一场误会,而牺牲了她们三年的友情。小麦从那天起,一直过着伤心的生活。几年后,她无意间发现自己患上了癌症,而且是末期的脑癌。

欢迎大家给予任何意见。也欢迎大家给予心目中想要的结局和最适合这篇故事的题目。谢谢。

14 comments:

M Ỡ Қ ҝ ¥ said...

awh...sad story. sobx sobx. the ending should be erm...the friend noe the friend got cancer, go visit the friend. then they 2 become very good friends like last time again. soon the friend who got cancer recover ady. they appreciate the value of friendship. happily ever after... =D what do you think?

ying said...

Icic. your idea quite good. or u think before the ending don't want the friend have cancer? what u feel after u read the story?

M Ỡ Қ ҝ ¥ said...

=D thank you. i think if the friend dun have cancer, the another friend would not want to see the friend. and their relationship may not improve. i feel sad after reading the story. and it happens frequently in this real world.

ying said...

u are welcome. icic. that means u think the friend have cancer is better to be the ending? icic. why feel sad? got feel touched?

M Ỡ Қ ҝ ¥ said...

ya can say so. yea kinda touched =D

ying said...

icic.thank you for your comments and idea. I appreciate it.^^

M Ỡ Қ ҝ ¥ said...

oh no problem ^^

ying said...

ok^^

cola~~~huile~~~乐~~~ said...

wow..whr u get tis story..?..quite interesting..erm..the ending..in my opinion la..if the ending is a sad ending like after the frenz..another frenz receive her letter..only know the truth..she menyesal..but too late..then tis story can giv a msg to others to appreciate frienship n the ppl beside them..then the story will more intesting n sad..others after read the story will feel more touch..

ying said...

haha..this story I wrote by myself. icic. thank you very much for your idea. so what u feel after u read the story?

cola~~~huile~~~乐~~~ said...

erm..i feel ok lo..coz the story like in the half way..n til dun hav the ending..oso dunno is the happy or sad story..haha..

ying said...

icic. I mean got feel sad or touched or not?

cola~~~huile~~~乐~~~ said...

erm..touch or sad ar..if frm a story side c..feel ok lo..i think din feel sad or touch..coz oso dun hav ending..the stody like at the half road..err..i dunno how to said la..hehe..erm..if frm the real world..the xiao mai get cancer very kelian..haiz..

ying said...

Icic. haha...ok. thank you very much for your comments.